Thursday, November 10, 2011

Need comments/constructive criticism?

I got the impression the poem is about a proud person who likes to think he has always been an honest person, but doesn't necessarily understand the difference between honesty and truth. Liked the misteaching stanza repeated. A very conversational poem, but perhaps you should bring more imagery into the piece... (I can see you attempted to at the corresponding shapes line). Good work!

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